I was a student at Hay Park School and this blog is where I shared my learning.
Thursday, August 20, 2020
Great white shark!
Hey bloggers,
Today I got given the task to write about a shark using only 100 words. This was really difficult only using 100 words! I wrote a story about a great white shark named berry. Hope you guys enjoy! Here's my story.
Tino pai Yazmine. I rlike your catchy title and your labels. Next time try to make your google Drawing a bit bigger so it's easier to read. there's a video on how to do this here
I really enjoyed your post about the Great white shark. Maybe next time you could look back and try to make your google drawing a bit bigger cause its to tiny to read and see.
Tino pai Yazmine. I rlike your catchy title and your labels. Next time try to make your google Drawing a bit bigger so it's easier to read. there's a video on how to do this here
ReplyDeleteKia ora Yazmine,
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed your post about the Great white shark. Maybe next time you could look back and try to make your google drawing a bit bigger cause its to tiny to read and see.