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Tuesday, December 24, 2019
Activity 3:scaling new heights
write a short explanation of what the charity does.
The charity I chose is the SPCA. The SPCA save animals that are abandoned,injured, neglected,sick or abused the SPCA have been protecting animals for over 140 years now and have saved over 40,000 animals in New Zealand.
Ahihi Mārie Yazmine, Kei te pai on making it to your first bonus activity of week one! I like that you have chosen the SPCA charity for this activity and that you have acknowledged their work with animals. This has proven to be a very popular charity with a lot of the students within the Ako Hiko cluster. It is important to remember that anything you post online must be put into your own words. I can see that you have made an effort to put some of the information from the SPCA website into your own words but in order to receive full points for this activity, could you please re-read the activity and create a blog post using your own words.
I look forward to reading an updated post for this activity, or even if you would like to reply to my comment. A really awesome place you could also look at on their site to learn more about the SPCA is: → https://www.spca.nz/what-we-do/educate-and-engage
Ahihi Mārie Yazmine,
ReplyDeleteKei te pai on making it to your first bonus activity of week one! I like that you have chosen the SPCA charity for this activity and that you have acknowledged their work with animals. This has proven to be a very popular charity with a lot of the students within the Ako Hiko cluster.
It is important to remember that anything you post online must be put into your own words. I can see that you have made an effort to put some of the information from the SPCA website into your own words but in order to receive full points for this activity, could you please re-read the activity and create a blog post using your own words.
I look forward to reading an updated post for this activity, or even if you would like to reply to my comment.
A really awesome place you could also look at on their site to learn more about the SPCA is:
→ https://www.spca.nz/what-we-do/educate-and-engage
Kueni :)