hi bloggers,
i have been trying really hard two catch up with the others in doing the summer learning journey its really hard two its just because i have been in Orewa and i was trying two access the site but i coulden't with no internet but it Ok i still enjoyed my time in Orewa oh well.
Today our activity is two describe our own beast useing our imagination hope you enjoy and tell me if my beast sound scary two you?
my beast has the BIGEST eyes and red eyes that are lazer beam with sharp yellow teeth,he haze two devil ears with dark blackish brownish hair. He has the when you feel him he feels like yucky gooo my beast also know how two swim and he also knows how to dance, my beast knows how to use a sword and knows how to protect his family. My beast loves two have nice warm baths with 2 bath fizzers when he is really angry, my beast is really kind he may look scary but he's really kind.
(he doesn't like it when they try two kill him) the food my beast loves two have is fish, birds, honey and pancakes he makes them himself.
Hi Yazmine,
ReplyDeleteIt's Gargee from HPS, you already know me. I love the sound of your beast, he is like a protector, a scary mess, and a sweet pancake lover. I have made a beast that looks scary, but he can turn into a cute, fluffy bear which is evil inside. I had a little bit of trouble reading your post, so maybe you could go back and check that your work makes sense. I really want this monster writing to be readable for everyone, as it is very nice. Do you have a name for your sweet monster.
Merry Christmas
Happy blogging
Gargee HPS
hpsgargeej.blogspot.co.nz
Hello Yazmine
ReplyDeleteIt's me Vitaraag. I thoroughly enjoyed reading your blog post. Next time you could make an conclusion. If you want to comment on my blog here is the link. https://hpsvitaraagj.blogspot.com/
Vitaraag
Aloha Yazmine,
ReplyDeleteYour beast sounds like he looks scary, but his personality doesn't sound so scary. He seems like he knows how to have fun! :) I thought it was cool that you explained what he likes to do when he gets angry, taking a bath wouldn't have been my first guess...
You have used lots of adjectives to describe your beast, ka pai. I am curious about what he smells like since he is slimy but also has fur, interesting combination!
I love the movie 'Fantastic Beasts And Where To Find Them', have you seen it? One of my favourite creatures from the film was Newt's Bowtruckle, I thought its tiny green twig-like body, leafy head and little brown eyes were really cute!
I look forward to seeing more of your creativity in your posts.
Toe feiloa'i fo'i,
Cia.